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i'm sort of getting angry at bob, here. he says everything i want to say, but better than i could say it. he is correct that you have no rhythm ...

fools, they called you a goddess of peace in a cage of stars, spider water wing rivulets laving the skin – a bright white sparkling light. they thought heaven would ...

i won't critique the subject too much, as i think it's far too much of a controversy in poetic america, and as me, myself, and many others are guilty of ...

no comment on spuds attacks. apparently, it's been banned. dirty goo. a funny word. it's fine to use, but i just wanted to point it out. heh. goo. flaming pie, ...

nice, sweet, simple. i liked the somber tone of WINDMILL compared to SMILES. but i'm only comparing them because they on the same thread. BOARD SPACE SAVER - I WORSHIP ...

your poetry is good, and i agree completely with PsyLynx, so i'm not going to rewrite that all, as that'd be a waste of time. i just beg you to ...

wishing for a suburbia wish - ing - for - a - su - bur - bi - a 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 just cut our ...

Which waterfall?— the droplets wet my tongue— Which waterfall? Ah, Autumn, maybe. How should I know? this is sort of pointless and not as pretty as they rest of the ...

wow. i loved the combination of technical speech and the poetry. this was absolutely beautiful, everything fit, i loved the rhythm (not obvious but you can hear it when you ...

you were just as a disturbing 4th grader as i was! i wrote poem about charred, black burning bodies. fun fun. but i must admit that this shows signs of ...

i, personally, liked it. then again, i also liked your old style better. this means more to me - it makes more sense and fullfills certains passions i can share ...

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: wow. i never laugh so much. i love you! this rocked. i'll never eat a hot dog the same way again

i could go on about labyrinth (and recite every line), but i'd much rather critique this poem. it's meaning was powerful, but as you tried to incorporate more labyrinth into ...

wow. i enjoyed this. it was short and sweet, but every word held new meaning. well, it was a bit repetitive, but only to get the point across, so i ...

why do you post poetry if you know that all your going to get is praise? :D it's not fair. i'd pout, but i'd have nothing to complain about, really. ...